Roaming Shadow

Okay, after several false starts, I'm pretty sure I actually have a coherent plot, or at least enough to get started. I know the who, where, most of the what, ...

Ah, Eramus! I remember him from the character dialogue way back when. I think it was he who made reference to the origins of Conall's name. Or was that the ...

Here we go, some history. Not quite what I was expecting, but if everything went as expected, it wouldn’t be an interesting story, would it? However, going back a full ...

Foreword: I’m not going to look too hard for grammar or spelling mistakes, as those are things that are usually easily found when you reread it or edit it. I’ll ...

Here's the next installment for all those interested. This is Chpater three, and is just over 4,000 words. As always, take your time, hold nothing back, and I hope you ...

Here's Chapter 1 critiqued. Personally, I felt the best thing about this peice was the characterization. You've already got me caring about Kaliyah, and the secondary characters don't recieve excess ...

And here's chapter four for you.

Hey, got the next two chapters for you. I hope you're finding my critiques helpful, and I'm still interested in where this story goes. Keep at it.

Well, now that that's settled, peacefully, we can get on to more important things. Like, why were any of you getting Christmasy before Thanksgiving!? Come on people! Give Thanksgiving a ...

Way to make friends Conall. ~Alex I made my position clear. If he doesn't like it, well, to each their own. But like I said, their secret is safe as ...

Sorry, seems I misinterpreted that earlier. I guess that makes ten shapeshifters. ~Conall Missed that too. Well, I was close enough. ~Alex And Finnlagh, your secret is safe with us ...

Well, there's me for starters. ~Alex And me. ~Conall Me as well. ~Killesha I'd certainly qualify. ~"Lycan" Then there's Eramus, Fionnahagh, Decorus, and I'm not sure about the vampire. That ...

Huuuhhhhh...? ~Alex A little over your head? ~Conall Shut it. I think I've sifted through the words enough to get what he said. Why can't people ever speak simply? ~Alex ...

Man, this could get seriously philisophical (and may already have), so I'll just put in my two cents. I think an error that is easy to make is the good/evil, ...

Space. Give me a space and I can make a life. I don't need much more than my wits. ~Conall If you don't have space, where ya gonna put your ...